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When Kelly English flies back to
falling in love. Again. Kelly is twenty-eight and engaged to an older man who is quite wealthy. She’s happy, and only desires to make the trip back brief, sell her deceased father’s place, and return to her stable life in Los Angeles. However, while taking care of business in
EXCERPT:
Chapter 19
Mitch cancelled
his clients for Monday. He would later tell me he would have willingly
cancelled his clients for the entire summer just to spend time together. He
that much had fallen for me. And I for him.
I called my
office as soon as I thought Gwen would be in, adjusting for the two-hour time
difference.
“Kelly, where the
hell have you been? That Seagram account executive's been buzzing all morning,”
Gwen ripped off immediately.
“I'm still in Oshkosh ,” I said,
picturing the company man with hair just a little too much in place, and a
smile a little too phony. Last week I would have flown to Nepal , if
that's what it took to nail down the liquor conglomerate's ad business. Today, all that seemed to matter
was getting out on the water with Mitch and Sam. What had changed?
“Kelly?” Gwen's
tone had softened considerably. “What's going on?”
“Don't worry.”
“Now I am worried,” Gwen said. “Seagram's
not the only one's been calling.”
“Thomas?”
“Only say, five
times.”
“I'll call him,”
I said.
“Kelly?”
“Yes.”
“Take care of
yourself.”
“I will. See you
soon,” I said, and disconnected. For a long moment, I stood in front of the bay
window and looked out over the lake. The chop was less than yesterday,
definitely no whitecaps, but the water's blue shade had been replaced by a gray
undertone, reflecting the overcast of the sky. Mitch had listened to the
weather before breakfast. The forecast called for a forty percent chance of
rain, with intermittent local thundershowers. The Mako had a top we could put
up so the rain would be no problem.
I didn't relish
calling Thomas, he would be angry, yet I knew it was the right, the only thing
to do. Watching Mitch and Sam loading the boat, I supposed I should have felt
at least a modicum of guilt about the last couple of days. I didn't, and this
bothered me more than feeling any remorse at all.
As time passed
forward, I would come to justify these feeling as an acceptance of a decision I
hadn't really made, but had been made for me by circumstances beyond my
control. An emotion as strong and powerful as love had divided thrones and started
wars. What chance did a young woman have? None. I would never, could never,
tell Thomas this, though. At least, not today.
“Hi, Thomas,” I
said as soon as he answered.
“Kelly.” No
Kell-bee this time. “I tried calling you all afternoon yesterday. I've been
worried sick. When's your flight?”
“Oh, Thomas...”
“Are you in some
kind of trouble?”
I'm in
trouble all right. “No, hon. It's just taking me longer
than I thought to close out Daddy's estate. How's the magazine? Gwen said Seagram's
up in arms.”
“To hell with
Seagram's.” His exasperation was clearly evident. “I'm flying out there today.
We'll—“
“No, Thomas.”
“What do you
mean, no?”
“I'm handling it.
Thomas, you have to...” I caught myself wanting to say trust, but chose believe
instead, “believe me. I'll be home... soon.”
“When?”
I was caught. I
had to say something. “Thursday,” I said, calculating that would give me at
least tomorrow and Wednesday for... what? I'd gone insane, that was it. Emotionally
insane.
“We'll talk when
I get home,” I finished.
When I hung up, I
knew the engagement was on the ropes. I just couldn't come out and say it. Not
yet. I gazed at the huge rock adorning my finger. How could events change so
rapidly? Why can't I just pack up now and leave? Take the rental straight to Appleton , catch the next
flight out, and get the hell on with my life. Just do it. Save yourself a ton
of heartaches, girl.
Mitch and Sam
were walking off the dock. Mitch saw me in the window and gave a little salute.
Ship's set for sailing, ma'am. I smiled and saluted back, my effort not near as
crisp or sharp. Maybe because this is my life. The here and now.
The ice chest was
loaded with beer, sandwich meat, cheese sticks for snacking, a couple of
apples, and candy bars. I brought along the bread and a bag of chips I'd found
stashed in a cabinet above the dishwasher. We also took along the net, two
fishing poles, and Gene's tackle box, just in case, Mitch said.
I sat on a
cushion seat in front of the console, facing the bow, as the Mako sped north
along the shoreline. The air whisking my hair off my face was cool and moist,
and left me feeling clean and pure, as if I'd just been baptized. Mitch stood
behind the wheel, a Packer's cap turned backward on his head. He looks like a
merchant marine, I thought, strong and handsome. I felt his finger tap the top
of my head, and saw him pointing. Not thirty yards off the starboard side, a
flock of at least a dozen ducks were streaking parallel to the boat in perfect
linear formation.
“Mallards?” I
shouted.
Mitch grinned.
“See, you're a waterfowl expert now.”
The mallards
veered away after the Mako zipped past Roe Point for more open water. The hull
bounced some, but not enough to make me or Sam, curled just behind the bow,
uncomfortable.
I pulled a light
jacket I'd borrowed from my father's closet tighter across my front. I heard
Mitch rev the engine and felt a surge in acceleration.
Off my left
shoulder I watched us pass the Pioneer Resort Marina, and then the mouth of the
Fox River .
Mitch named off
landmarks—Bray's Point, Miller Bay , Doemel Point, Menomenee Park ,—as
we sped north.
I saw boats
fishing, sailboats, and several water skiers in wet suits.
I heard Mitch
say, “You want to ski?”
“What's the water
temperature?”
“Sixty-two.”
“I'll pass.”
“Wanna pilot?”
I waved. “I'm
fine here. I just like watching the lake.”
“You sound like
your dad.”
His words touched
me somewhere deep in my chest, and I turned and leaned up on my knees and
kissed Mitch. The choppiness of the water made my first attempt fall short,
landing on his chin, but my next effort was right on the money. The kiss was
brief, yet warmed me inside out.
“You're
beautiful,” he said.
I didn't think I looked beautiful, with my hair all over the place, yet
felt like a princess when Mitch told me.
~*~
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Alan Nayes was born in Houston
and grew up on the Texas
gulf coast. He lives in Southern California . He
is the author of the critically-acclaimed biomedical thrillers, GARGOYLES and THE UNNATURAL. His most recent releases are BARBARY POINT, a love story, and SMILODON, a science thriller. GIRL
BLUE, an erotic horror story will be released by Samhain Publishing in
2012.
An avid
outdoorsman and fitness enthusiast, he is one of only a few individuals to ever swim across Wisconsin ’s
chilly Lake Winnebago . When not working on his
next project, he enjoys relaxing and fishing at the family vacation home in Wisconsin .
Thank you for being here today, Alan! Lake Winnebago...wow. Impressive. I, too, have swam across a lake, but it was the much smaller Little Newton Lake in Crivitz, WI, where I grew up.
Love the cover for Barbary Point, and after checking out your website, I think I'm going to have to purchase myself a copy of Smilodon. Not a genre I normally read, but that's what I absolutely love about Indie Writer's Unite--I'm discovering a bunch of new authors and their great books!
Don't forget to comment with your contact information for your chance to win a copy of Barbary Point.
Have a wonderful week everyone!
Stacey Joy Netzel
I love reading Alan's works. Gargoyles was awesome. I can't wait for part two of that book.
ReplyDeleteAlan I love the cover of Barbary Point. It's beautiful. I wish you much success with this book the excerpt was great thank you and Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, Happy Chanukah. I hope I covered all politically correct aspects of Christmas, lol.
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Barbary Point is going to be a great story to read, if that chapter was any indication.
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Will just add my hearty recommendation for the novel! It is wonderful!
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Glenda
A friend of mine just told me about this book through Goodreads and said I had to read it that Barbary Point was beautiful romance novel. Thanks for the great giveaway and Congrats Alan on such a great book!!!!!
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Alan, I just know where Lake Winnebago is and how big it is. I'd do Little Newton again, but it's only about a 30-45 min swim each way. Maybe with the kids one of these summers.
ReplyDeleteAnd you're welcome--glad to have you here. :)
There is no feeling in the world like skimming across the surface of a small lake in a boat, with the wind in your hair. I spent many happy hours on the water with my dad. Reading about Kelly's experience brings back a lot of memories.
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Alan, Hemlock Pond sounds awesome, so please finish it. LOL Barbary Point sounds great, too. Loved the excerpt.
ReplyDeleteNever swam across a lake, but I've ridden across many lakes. :-) The husband has been dragging me along fishing for more years than I care to admit to...LOL
Thank you, Alan. That's very generous! I look forward to checking out the book. :) And thanks again for guesting!
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